Hey everyone!

I’m working on an interactive short narrative built in Twine called PONS—it’s a psychological, branching story that explores themes of control, inner conflict, and fractured decision-making.

You play as Ana, a woman struggling with the constant intrusion of an internal voice (The Voice) that questions her thoughts, decisions, and identity. Your choices shape how her story unfolds, and possibly how it ends.

Right now, I'm looking for short feedback that can be filled out in the google forms:

Updated 23 days ago
StatusPrototype
CategoryOther
PlatformsHTML5
Rating
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Authorolty_polty
Made withTwine
TagsNarrative, Short, Thriller